Outlining and research papers are two curricular objectives
that both students and teachers dread.
Generally speaking this is because they are both formulaic. In outlining if you have an “A”, you must
have a “B” – if you have a “1” you must have a “2”. Research papers tend to be expanded five
paragraph essays on topics that most students can find on-line. Some school districts have a minimum research
paper requirement of around four pages with five sources that are scored by
outside sources using a standing 4 to 6 point rubric. These nameless scorers
use the usual domains indicating the level of control exhibited by the writer
in content, style, grammar and proper research and attribution of quotes and
information.
Teachers may start teaching mind mapping, webbing, word
clouds,
Creatly (a source for every organizational chart in the “universe”) or
other meta-cognitive methodologies for learners with a wide variety of thinking
patterns to get on the path to finding a worthy research paper topic. Dutifully, around March or earlier, this
painful process has started in grades five through twelve. Younger students
usually do reports, not true research papers because developmentally, they are
not quite ready to grasp the necessary concepts. Especially the idea of
presenting the “straw dog” or the hypothetical argument that runs counter to
their thesis statement.
By the time I started teaching high school in 2001, I had
decided that placing the research paper near the end of the school year was a
mistake. I needed it to be the first
assignment. I was fresh; students were
ready for a new beginning and somehow, waiting until later in the year, just
made teaching or re-teaching all necessary skills seem like scaling Mount
Everest instead of an achievable assignment.
I never had to endure the ordeal of getting my students through passing
the eleventh-grade research paper, but I wanted to have them so well-prepared –
that it would feel simple to them – almost like child’s play when they left my
ninth or tenth grade classroom.
My love of outlining as an organizational tool for writing
and for thinking is because it makes my job of responding to students easier.
All the other cool graphic organizers still have to be redone to develop the
concept of main idea, supporting detail, and related supporting fact in a
hierarchical order. Undertaking this arranging of information to support a
thesis statement perfectly describes an outline. The trick I've found to take
away the pain of outlining is the take away the rules. Students don’t always have to have a “B” or a
“2”. Additionally, have your students
write the bibliographic reference next to the information collected from that
source in the outline INCLUDING THE PAGE NUMBERS! Direct quotes are printed and turned in with
the outline, or if you are lucky, you can have your students turn work in
through the Cloud or a Wiki – you can form a group with you as the
administrator and then only you and the author have the ability to edit a piece
of work.
It is messy to allow students to rampage about looking for a
topic with an anything goes attitude.
Yes, I know students MUST write about something they care about, but for
everyone’s sanity, choose an umbrella topic.
Since I was in a biotech program, I posed the question: Is forensic
science reliable ninety-nine percent of the time? Ask colleagues for input about what “big”
umbrella topic would work to help them.
Your job is really to be the expert about the mechanics. In middle school, my umbrella topic was WWII,
which helped the social studies teacher. I also used the papers to have
students form groups and write newspapers that might have existed at that time.
With an overarching
topic like this, your librarian can be an invaluable help gathering materials,
helping students and working with you to point students to appropriate resource
material. It truly expands the learning
when students can return to their work and create poems, feature articles,
Power Point presentations,
Prezis and even animated
PowToons.
This is a place for one of those “I Believe” statements that
I talk about. You have to be ready to
believe that no matter what the haters hurl at you – you are prepared to speak
about how putting this important project first, you have harnessed students
creative energy at the right time and that having looked at the curriculum from
middle school, you have learned that students should already have an initial
grasp of the demands of a research paper.
This reminds me, you may find that a lot of your students
have been taught incorrect steps – many of my students wanted to outline the
opening and closing paragraph. This is sensitive ground because you may be
thought of as being critical of a former beloved teacher. I have blown this so
I don’t want you to make the same mistake. Have a copy of a page from a grammar
book that supports your scenario and quietly hand it out asking a student to
read the highlighted portion aloud. Explain that you know many things have
changed, but this rule(s) still seems to count.
Please do yourself a favor and get this out of the way
during the first few weeks of school and use outlining as much as you can. Don’t forget about a theme for your classroom
– humanize yourself!