You've heard the whine.
I’m not creative, I can’t write a poem. You can change out the word poem
for any genre that involves creative writing.
I know many teachers still use journal entry topic starters, but I don’t
know how you interact with your students’ writing. Do you read every entry, do you have students
select certain entries for you to read and then evaluate them in some way? I
always had trouble with journals because I felt compelled to read every entry
and make at least some positive comment or suggestions. I finally stopped journals and having
students share journal entries because I didn't feel I was getting enough
learning bang for the buck. I know many teachers do have a great deal of
success with journaling and many students love it, but in many cases teachers
don’t read the entries and students practice crummy grammar, ineffective word
choice and don’t take the assignment seriously.
I always wrote in my journal (when I was trying my best to
keep up with this) when students wrote and shared what I wrote if the time was
right. I alternated collecting journals so that at any given time I only had
two class sets to read through and evaluate. I developed lists of topics and
told students if they were stuck, to just keep writing the word “hamburger” over
and over again until something popped into their brains. I guess this bothered
me because it felt like going to the piano teacher for my lessons.
I had to play the Mozart or perhaps it was Bach music drills
every day with a metronome and I grew to hate them. My wonderful teacher, Mrs.
Cho, knew I wasn't practicing them, except for right before my weekly lesson,
and that I hated following the dynamic instructions on pieces like the Moonlight Sonata. I played it with gusto
and passion and as Mrs. Cho pointed out it was pianissimo. I wondered if my students felt the same way.
Perhaps for some the journals were fantastic and the student loved doing the
daily writings, for others it was a chore and for others it created a hatred
for writing. All I know is that once I
felt the dishonesty of not being able to read every entry, I couldn't assign
journaling any more.
However, I do have a wonderful way to replace it – writing for
publication, contests, money making schemes – portfolios. You can get The Writers Guide on-line and find many ways for your students to
write for profit or for publication.
That idea generally gets their attention. How do you teach them to
become creative?
Two tricks – students may do this in cooperative groups for
practice after you've modeled it creating a whole new version of “Old MacDonald
Had A Car” E I E I OOO – And on this car he had a bull horn E I E I OOO – With A
Honk-Squeal Here and A Honk-Squeal There – Here a Honk – There a Honk-
Everywhere a Honk-Squeal . . . (You get the gist!)
The idea is to take an old favorite and change or twist
one element of the song or story. (Trick #1) For instance, what would change about the
story, Cinderella, if it were set on
the Moon? No glass slipper, but a space boot in zero gravity. Change a few characters
and add a few plot twists and a whole new story will appear.
As you work through this process with the whole class, warn
students that if their story doesn't flow easily from their brain - that means
the twists or changes aren't working and they should try another story and
change a different element. You and the
student will know that the creative muse is “on fire” when the new “creative”
story almost writes itself.
Now that you have modeled the process with a song, and gone
through it with the whole class using Cinderella or some other story that you
feel will work with your class, you can have small groups create a rough draft
story to share aloud with the class.
Allow student groups fifteen minutes to prepare and give them some
sheets of newsprint and markers to use for story-boarding unless they have I Pads
and can brainstorm a quick story on their high tech device.
I am making the assumption that this will either be an
introduction to a unit on short stories, myths, legends, etc. or a
conclusion. You can reinforce all the
elements of fictional writing and stylistic devices such as use of: adjectives,
adverbs, synonyms, similes, metaphors and the like.
The groups will come up with some amazing stories – this is
a fun lesson and a great assessment tool to see what you need to reteach.
Finally, students can be asked to come up with a story on their own to publish
for a contest or to try and make money using The Writers Guide or some other source for places to publish. For
me, this assignment took time because my student writers shifted to stories
that morphed into something they cared about – I told them they never had to
stick to the original story – just let ideas grow.
If students saw a
movie, show or any other piece of media that “got” to them – it was okay to use
it as a starting point. The finished
story deadline was usually around every four to five weeks and replaced journal
writing. It could be a non-fiction piece
after we had completed the objectives surrounding fiction and poetry.
How to be creative easy trick #2: Explain how two
very unlike things are alike. This is
usually good for writing poetry. Start
with a question on the board – such as:
How is a tree like love? How is
the sun like friendship? Creativity is the smashing together of two unlike things
and finding out what they might have in common.
Trees
The solid bark of the
dark brown oak tree supports my back.
Sitting quietly, I am
content feeling the rough texture press through my shirt.
My tree has always
been here in my park. I lose my lonely feelings when I sit beneath its
branches.
It makes me believe
in forever.
It makes me feel safe
in all seasons - in all weather.
My initials are
carved in the bark – very lightly.
When the sun sets,
you can barely see them - so when I come at night, I touch them with my fingers
as if blind and I am at peace. (I will know when I have found true love because
her initials will be there, too.)
Although this poem never uses the word love – that is the
metaphor it creates – for students in earlier grades, you may want to include
both words. (See the last line of the poem that I added in parenthesis with
the word love because this is an abstract concept and it may be beyond their
comprehension level developmentally.)
You can now banish all whining about lack of creativity in
your classes because you have given students the pocket skills: take a familiar
story and change one element to create a new story and take two very unlike
things and find ways that they are alike.
Simple concepts, but they do take practice.
I have had adults tell me they are not creative and have
taught them these two concepts in a minute or two (not real in-depth lessons)
just quick illustrations. This was so
they could help their children with assignments. Most parents were very
grateful for the simple tips – it was something they could understand and
apply. I hope this helps you avoid bringing in a tiny violin to play when your
students start to whine.
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